If i could be totally honest...

yes. certin feelings we will never tell.

If i could be totally honest with you,
what would i say?

Would i tell you how i feel about those shirts you always wear?
Or what about those shoes?
Those scaps on your arms and legs?
About how you treat everyone?
How annoying it is when you complain?
How you never ask for help?
Or bearly wave?

No.

If i could be totally honest with you,
i would say:

That i love it when you say "Hey" to me.
That i love those stupid pictures you draw.
That i love what you talk about.
That i love that your still a seventeen year old.
That i love how relaxed you are on the outside,
but your terrified on the inside.
That i love your laugh.
That i love that you can cook.
That i love when you open the door for me.
That i love when you walk with me.
That i love your voice.

but most of all,
i would tell you my true feelings.

But i'll never tell.

I'll never be totally honest with you.

Author's Note

ignore spelling.
tell me if you've held in any feelings for someone.

Reviews

[Bexers]

It's sad that you can never be totally honest with someone.
If you never are, you never will fully live.

Anyways, great job on the poem. It sounds a lot like something I recently wrote called "The Compromise"