Clouds Of Their Own Given Graces (Tetrameter Version - Original)

Each liberated raindrop of

Personal salvation has it's

Place in the history of one's

Transformation into the winds

Of prosperity's vocal storm

Governed from deemed aspirations

Dawned precipitation set forth

A discovered dream's persona

Showering an overcast of

Hope among benefactor's with

Illustrated intention's to

Shine enlightened testimony

Through spiritual epiphanies

Artful foreground's of veiled choices

Will depict imagery as the

Clouds Of Their Own Given Graces

Author's Note

Here's a new theme for all my true writerscafe fans. Sorry for the delay with new material. I've been busy lately with life while publishing and promoting my new book. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Wow,
Nice structure and flow;
graceful with clearness and emotion.

[BlackRose]

Wonderful piece. As if she/he was sadden in their life and has now found the graces to live past it all, to live their dream as they've always wanted.

[Corset]

while I enjoy your poetry B-poet, I have to say many times it goes over my hear like fast jets, it's always comprehensive, clear, precise but often I can not comprehend, that is my own inept brain at fault, but there are phrases that are written so intelligently that one has to really read and reread to even get a glimpse of what is driving the vehicle. "Clouds of their own given graces", now what does this mean to me? for me it means she does her own rain dance by way of her beliefs, if she is sad it because her grace has made her sacrifice one almost to much to bear so it causes her/him great sadness-hence the clouds, and all that thought process is for only one line. I am still waiting on the 15th for extra money then I will have all the time in the world to process your other lines and a entire book :P

[Jennie Baron]

Wonderful material for your return to WritersCafe! I always marvel at your adept word choice and learn from the way you build upon images.