The Depths Of A Loyal Giving Heart (Trimeter Version)

An emotional gold

Miner's paradise had

Sufficed to permit soul

Exchanges advised as

Influenced prescriptions

To change the afflicted

Conditions people caught

From involuntary

Sufferance still lingered

Within hungered psyche's

Wanting membership

For healing in order

To be apart of the

Same reformation tree

Most and all of them had

Befriended a giver's

Parenting belief in

A fresh start from The Depths

Of A Loyal Giving Heart

Author's Note

A new theme I was working on. All reviews welcome thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Jennie Baron]

Reformation, healing, a fresh start, loyalty--all encouraging, heartwarming themes, beautifully stated. I particularly like this one.

[613]

This was a solid read. Amazing work.

- Brittney

P.S. If you wouldn't mind, I would love it if you could please review my work. I'm trying to get one step closer to publishing; but can't do that without your help!