A Need For More Smiles Than Seen Tears (Di-Meter Version)

Aching moments

Of regret haunt

A Dreadfulness

Imagine labored

In the back of

Our minds beset

By dramatic

Morbid induced

Fears had canted

A Need For More

Smiles Than Seen Tears

Author's Note

I was trying to decide whether or not to use canted instead of supplied or vice versa. All reviews welcome thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Jennie Baron]

Sometimes life is filled with "aching moments" of regret that are always near the surface. Sometimes we make up for it with smiles or create smiles in others; sometimes we're not so successful. Well penned, B!

[Kelly Scheppers]

Whenever I'm indecisive as to which word to use, I go with the one that catches my ear when read aloud. ...I know, pretty deep, huh?

Nice meeting you, btw! ; )