Meaningful Dawned Tomorrow's (Octameter Version 3)

Ceremonial rays of sunshine vividly interplay as

A Meaningful landscapes monologue pulsated within the hearts

Of beloved observers who pictured jubilation within luck

Scenic signs of a personal revelation's balcony style

View unveiled written clues where a lasting rainbow's gleeful message

Mirrored in the air Dawned fluorescent flares from Tomorrow's graced sky

By far calligraphic cumulus clouds found telepathy as

Soliloquies befittingly spelled aloud profound vows later

Revealed what's yet to come from everyone's unbridled future's past

Author's Note

This is Version 3 of the original, yet there's one exception. This poem is written with the same meter as Edgar Allen Poe's the Raven. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by and enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Malen]

I adore your word play and venturing melody.
This particular piece strikes a richness in play
That dances brite where is shouldn't.
I must go read more, excuse me please.

[Jennie Baron]

As always I'm amazed at how fluently your words flow. And I love the imagery, particularly the rainbow and the clouds. Beautifully done!

[Confuser]

You are no doubt a great writer - this poem to me has so many meanings: I have formed a visual, not easily, I must say, from rich metaphors, the sun dancing in and about like a dance; the memories we hold so dear- the watchers, their delight; to me it could be a marriage, or a divorce; or a departure from what we thought - a parting; it is as if you are examinining writing styles, speaking out of turn or of hope - everyone has their own opinion, rainbows gleeful message (optimism) in the dawn - I see another day to look forward to, unveiled written clues; is the opposite of this writing. But what was thought or heard has changed. I really enjoyed reading and trying to discover the meaning. Thank you. Dale