Purposeful Perfected Pain (Couplet Version)

Expressed in an eloquent reviled way

Purposeful Perfected Pain's art display

Opened a particular doorway's draft

Of suspense left guests in awe of their craft

Within a hotel of sorrows daylight

Vacated most open windows in sight

Leaving behind nightly reflective ties

For how a phantasmal spirit complies

With healed distinctions of a haloed winds

Resurgent truths befitting judgment finds

Vowed attempts for a clean slated canvass

Where happiness always checkmates pain's class

Of deniable joy on each lost face

Who made it out of that sorrowful place

Where haunted screams of regretful beings

Echoed alongside a crow's shadowed wings

Author's Note

A couplet is a rhyming two line poem with ten syllables per line. A new theme I wanted to try out. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by and enjoy. :)

Reviews

[ms. barrie]

Amazing write, beautifully crafted. Profoundly compelling...
Absolutely brilliant! Thank you for sharing :)

[Jennie Baron]

I enjoyed this but then I always expect to enjoy your writing. Ingeniously chosen words, and that rhyme scheme makes them sound so good. Excellent!