Rapture…Interrupted (Upon Her Empty Pillow) (A Bpoet & MsJewel Collaboration)

I told my love 

While dreaming

In a soft whisper

Of the early morning

As a half-light stirred

A threatening slow pleasure

Since dawn would wish to hurry…

 

If I could turn back time love,

I would eclipse

This sunlight with a wink

Embracing each moment

Safely within your warm arms

Of dreams that linger

 

Forever awakening

In a sense

Of lost ravenous intentions

As a Rapture...Interrupted

A beloved

Stream of consciousness

In the mind of her love

Who cherished romantic sunsets

 

After taking her breath away

With his valiant efforts

Of devoted pleasure

It's a shame this rendezvous

Had came to an end

Within his passionate fantasy

Upon Her Empty Pillow

Author's Note

Bpoet's stanza's are italicized, MsJewel's are not. All reviews welcome thanks for stopping by & enjoy.

Reviews

[SyberRose]

Beautifully penned...enjoyed...always sad when love in dreams or reality comes to an end...Rose

[Frieda P]

Stunning collaboration, you work seamlessly together, this is just stirring enough to make one think of rapturous pleasures, great job!