Motivational Haiku/Senryu

If reward outweighs

The price that needs to be paid

Then cheers to success

Author's Note

I love promoting positivity so here's a sample of it. :) All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

Wow, this is really short but so wonderfully powerful. Well done, my friend.

[Destinyxi]

haha this is awesome. Made me smile. Thanks for sharing!

[Krista Weiss]

Wow! Really great poem and really great message! Loved it :)

[Alia ZJ.]

Sheer optimism. Cheers! :D

[DJ]

Nicely written senryu here B, honest and simple message portrayed in few words. Thank you for sharing, Cairo.

[MsJewel]

I've always admired this form of poetry and found it difficult to convey a message in so few words. You have mastered this and the message is wonderfully uplifting. Great work! :) Julie

[Leandro Mendez]

wow well put! awesome message on a little haiku!

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

So many people "sell out" in order to become successful; they tread upon anyone and anything that stands in their way. The price is too high... I like the sentiment of this one. If your own personal version of success means that you must pay a price higher than the reward, cast it away and learn to be happy with what you have. Nicely written!

[Rita L. Sev]

Cheers to success - however it may be defined! Very upbeat. :)

[SyberRose]

You are a success in writing poetry...thats for sure BP...Rose