Our Creator Will Get Our Attention Soon Or Later

Rumblings from the heaven's

Demanded an answer

Contrary to what's expected

Sometimes from within

Our own prideful mind & soul

Why have you strayed?

From the course I've set for you

A voice was heard

From the depth's of a dark clouded sky

Looking up & wondering why

Has this uproarious & thunderous

Compliance type of reasoning

Set forth to stir me

Into believing

A higher power is necessary

For keeping us from going astray

While living on earth respectively

Shedding light on a deeper perspective

Where we can only

Have our way momentarily until

The real heavenly parishioner

Proceeds by tearing off the roof

Our psyche & miniscule way of life

Making sure he sacrifices

His spiritual love & time

After stirring us towards why

Our Creator Will Get Our Attention Sooner Or Later

Before we reach the end of our lives

Author's Note

Just wanted to put together a creative & profound write. :) All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[DJ]

Nicely penned. A positive and thought provoking read of life, of a higher power and a reminder of both. Thanks :)

[Melody Telleria]

It was definitely profound, it was one of those eye opening pieces that tugged at my mind time and time after I read it. The truth in this poem resounds in your chosen words and beckons readers, I believe, to contemplate on what is greater than them yet seems to be the most invisible thing in their lives. As lease that is how I felt, like it was a wake up call and a reminder that our Creator certaintly is keeping his eyes on us and our worldy ways. Great write!

[Pryde Foltz]

I would suggest that a higher power always has our attention we just don't know how to interpret the message. Well done, Bpoet.

[Rita L. Sev]

He's got my attention, BP, and so does this write. Well done.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Very positive flows of thought, it speaks no other but the truth of life.

[Frieda P]

Mission accomplished Bpoet, it's profound and thought provoking. Omnipotent read here, perhaps he needs his own website to get through to people today, just saying. :-)

[Alia ZJ.]

WOW! Just amazing. It really made me think over several aspects that had already been running in my mind for the past days. I especially loved the second stanza :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like this...made me think it might be about time to start building another ark...

because if he's up there, he can't be too happy with what he has been seeing the past century.