The Climb Is More Significant Than Reaching The Mountain Top

It's a perilous

Ending hike

Up a steep incline

Testing the outer limits

Of your will to survive

A climb

More distinctive than anything else

You've had to contrive it

As formidable feat

Defying wayward eyes

In awe of what has transpired

It's frivolous

To think about

Dropping down to the bottom

After making it halfway up

A treacherous & rocky slope

You've realized

A conquering desire has started

An inability to stop

Being daring because

The Climb Is More Significant Than Reaching The Mountain Top

Author's Note

Still experimenting new theme's & written creativity. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[Anand Sehgal]

You've realized

A conquering desire has started

An inability to stop

Being daring because

The Climb Is More Significant Than Reaching The Mountain Top

you wrote my mind .. 100/100

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[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

lovely message here presented in an interesting way. well done :D

[Dana Alsamsam]

a much visited theme gilded by your wonderful words! it most definitely is the journey and not the destination. great work

[Frieda P]

The journey is more important than where you're going, you put it so aptly in your poetry. Smell the coffee on the way up. ;-) Great one Bpoet!

[SyberRose]

I think you hit the nail on the head with this one...I enjoyed reading BP...Rose

[Leandro Mendez]

awesome, thought provoking piece, Bpoet!

[DJ]

A nice write, simple message but one which is very true. I enjoyed reading this piece, the journey is definitely more important than the destination. Thanks.

[kublakhan27]

Excellent advice, I wish I was better at following it myself...thanks for sharing :)

[RainDancer1997]

It reminds me of life. You learn as you get to life's peak

[Rita L. Sev]

A good poem following an apt title - it is indeed the climb...