Lovingly Striking

What catches the eye

Of every suspecting gentleman

Who would dare

To comply

With making a complementary pass

At a captivating woman

Whose standing right in front of him

 

He makes a nice gesture

To admire her beauty

By giving her a white rose

With a composed & smiling

Expression on his face

 

It's quite symbolic he thinks

As she knowingly blinks

Back at him

Showcasing a glance of flattery

Is truly an embodiment

Of what it takes to be

A woman who's Lovingly Striking

Author's Note

I'm trying a new theme. I'm admiring beauty in a quick write. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

Reviews

[KeelyJane]

Wow. First, let me say that it is truly an honor and great compliment to be a muse for any of your writings. You are an extraordinary talent and to be a part of your work in any way is a humbling. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind words. Much respect my friend.

[Dana Alsamsam]

i love the sophisticated black tie feel of this romance exchanged. the whole piece feels like a subtle wink that you barely even know that you saw. the white rose fits perfectly. i love how you're beginning to experiment with stanza breaks. i love seeing your talent grow and grow. lovely work!

[Krista Weiss]

Aww! I really like this one! It's really cute! :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

I liked this one, my friend! I like the breaking up of stanzas and the change in concepts that you've chosen to tackle. Still, you have the same poetic voice as always, which is great because your writing is always easy to pick out of the crowd. Nicely done!

[shallimarRose]

Ha... Just don't yell Nice Rack.. I hate that..

This is quite thought provoking actually Brian... xoxo Rose