Lovingly Striking

Lovingly Striking

A Poem by B-poet

What catches the eye

Of every suspecting gentleman

Who would dare

To comply

With making a complementary pass

At a captivating woman

Whose standing right in front of him

 

He makes a nice gesture

To admire her beauty

By giving her a white rose

With a composed & smiling

Expression on his face

 

It's quite symbolic he thinks

As she knowingly blinks

Back at him

Showcasing a glance of flattery

Is truly an embodiment

Of what it takes to be

A woman who's Lovingly Striking


© 2013 B-poet


Author's Note

B-poet
I'm trying a new theme. I'm admiring beauty in a quick write. All reviews welcome, thanks for stopping by & enjoy. :)

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Looovin' this. Wonderfully romantic. Can't wait to read what else you got.

Posted 11 Years Ago


awesome job Bpoet, keep bringing new themes!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I think we should take the time to recognize the "striking beauty" in others around us more often.
Nice job taking advantage of this opportunity to offer a "strikingly beautiful" write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Ahh white roses say 'you're heavenly'...so is this. Nicely pen'd Bpoet. :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Wonderfully romantic...really enjoyed :) x

Posted 11 Years Ago


A very lovely poem:) romantic, delightful, and sweet:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I am a huge fan of romantic poetry and this is lovely. I love how you worked the white rose in - so sweet and romantic. A delight to read! :) Julie

Posted 11 Years Ago


A sweet offering - a single rose says more than a bouquet...

*who's

Posted 11 Years Ago


One rose is just as flattering as a dozen roses...enjoyed BP...Rose

Posted 11 Years Ago


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DJ
I like this, well written. A nice way to describe a moment with a lady :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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