The Sweet Taste Of Friday (Version 2)

Making it through

A hectic week of personal forefeitures

We've all watched the week unfold

Beyond the measure of our expectations

We must console

Every soul

So they can only witness

On a near weekending day

A better version of themselves

Living like they're recurring dream

Towards happiness

Is destined to be while acquiring

The Sweet Taste Of Friday

Should mean more to them anyway 

Rather than living a boring life of domestic dormancy   

Forever in a day

Reviews

[Kristin Lee]

"a boring life of domestic dormancy" that is a powerful statement! Well done. I'm not sure which version I like better. They both have such good zingers.