The Shadows Of Daylight's Conspicuousness

Daylight's conspicuousness

Can be our valid friend

Due to the trends

Of attentiveness it displays

So our faces

Will process and initiate

The spectacle of adornment

For what's yet to come

Has been set

Before our very eyes

No lies can hide

In the midst of daylight's

Shadowy conspicuousness

Within the shade of true precedence

Is our disposition

And physical features

Meant to aid us in a game

Where unknown relevance

From within our hearts

Of best intentions

Symbolize

A mirrored reflection

Of our proven selves to society

By far

Being blatantly characterized

In the presence of others

Shown thru

The Shadows Of Daylight's Conspicuousness

 

Reviews

[audrie]

I really liked this - you are just so talented - this is a very detailed look into feelings of our yearning to be accepted by society

[Kristin Lee]

Being blatantly characterized by others, shadows of daylight, no lies can hide...seems like we are flirting with a bit of prophecy and perhaps hidden intentions. This one goes very deep indeed with its meaning, the words are merely the water we see on the surface. Reaching for the best of intentions is indeed a rightous path, but why hide? Very thought provoking.

[Rogue]

Heading for the center of the earth are we? You went extremely deep on this one. :)

Not sure I am following the footsteps you left behind.. My flashlight keeps going out on me. -grin-

In the light of day all shadows will be removed and everything will be revealed in the glare? No? Maybe? Rogue get out of my thread? :P

:)

[kublakhan27]

This one is a thinker for sure...I've read it a few times and have taken different ideas from it with each reading...a finely-written and well-crafted piece :)