Poem # 180 Becoming Anointed As An Exalted Penmanship Bearer

The golden pen

I've chosen for

Commending masterful dissertation's

At hand while perfecting future masterpiece's

Yet to be in demand

After Becoming Anointed As An Exalted Penmanship Bearer

Will forever remove the barrier

Of creativity complacency

As long as my heart keeps yearning

To astonish and inspire

All readers

Who've been curious enough

To attend the anointing ceremony

For Bpoet

Who's been chosen to reign supreme

Unanimously by admirers and fans alike

After being exalted in the field

Of his chosen craft to be

Until my last sunset

Will start the awakening process

Of a new found spiritual life

I'm desiring to partake in as the present day's

Valley of yesterday's are now gone forever

In a day

I bid a final farewell towards what has taken place

For the greater good of my vast influential craft

I've displayed amongst the masses

That are presently at hand

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

There is a certain "final curtain call" feeling to this one, which would make me wonder if you're moving away from this place (that would be sad). You have always been a master of the beat and flow, which I love because I read your work in an inspirational way; it makes me think about my own writing.

[Kristin Lee]

Very interesting read. I sense a lot of angst and foreboding. It has a certain air that reminds me of words I might find in a book written by Hommer or another great. Well written.

[Rogue]

-sigh-

I don't like this one (content). It sounds like you are leaving. :(

Form and wording are excellent as always.