What's Next Within The Land Of The Unperceived

The unperceived

A questioning age for direction

As to what lies ahead

In the midst of destiny's intersection

Meant for all

Who've chose to be involved

In a dire search for the truth

Revolving around the sun

As gravity confides us

Within the earth's atmosphere

The elements of our relational ties

Aid in breaching the gaps that confine

Our planet as it spins on its axis

Thus not disclosing every hidden mystery

Inside of us all individually

As a race of humans

Yearning to know

How can we achieve immortality

In any calling after knowing

What's Next Within The Land Of The Unperceived

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

I love the title. This is true, we are a searching species; the only species that does this, I think. It is a constant struggle to be "better" and have "more"...the need and the desire are sometimes pushing us toward insanity. I think the whole of this one was successful. THe form, flow and emotion was all there; strong and in your signature style!

[Kristin Lee]

I read this feeling like we walk through life with blinders on...the land of unperceived. All the hidden mysteries we walk right past. There is such deep meaning beneath each sentence, and this has beautiful flow. Great job.

[kublakhan27]

The title sets the table flawlessly for this one...not much else to say except to give props for another great piece :)

[Nyida Strong]

I love your style of writing. You focus on topics that are more abstract. Not trees, flowers, or birds, but emotions, something far less tangible. I applaud you.

N. Strong

[Rogue]

This is a bit of a deep one..

I will just meander down the path of my thoughts here. Now don't stop me if I'm wrong. Like you ever do! -grin- I know you sit and laugh. :P

What's next? Hmmm.. We do have some measure of control albeit small.. Our well being, happiness, ideals, state of mind.. These things are within us to determine. Everything with out us is a wild card though.. That makes so much unpredictable and out of our hands to shape. We can plot a course to a specific destination but, if these other free flowing influences get in the way, we can find ourselves blown far and away off our original course.

You always make me think and ponder. Something I look forward to in your writes really. :)