Desiring The Need For Advocacy (Revised)

When people become broken unequivocally

The need for advocacy

To become whole as an individual

Resonates at its highest level

While wrestling spiritually

With preexisting conditions

The valley of needed seasonal changes

Needs to hear the cries

Of what's been seen behind

Watery eyes

Bearing with the discontented side

For what life has to offer

As the negative and incomprehensible lessons

Are laid out along everyone's

Self-governed pathways 

Subsequently our ancestry"s destinies revealed  

These blood lined experiences

Ultimately determine and shape

Our earthly fate

Actively demonstrating

Why we're currently and truthfully

Seeking and Desiring The Need For Advocacy

Along with trying to live up to a declaration hierarchy

Dormantly dwelling within ourselves

Until the time when eternity's doors close forever and ever

Beyond our voluntary control

Located in the vicinity near

Life's perpetual circle of predestined concerns

For humanity as a whole

 

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

There are many people in this world that need a kind word or a shoulder to lean on because the world has been an unkind place to them.

All walks of life have struggles some are just different from others.

This poem shows the strong need to be kind and help others who may need it when life throws rocks at our backs