Loving The Nest Of Unconditional Acceptance (Austere Version II)

Visiting The Nest Of Unconditional Acceptance

Remains a restful haven

For the cadence of a loving soul

Not welcomed within the world

Of cold deliberateness

This world's orchestrated intent

Comes from devious friendly faces

Hiding the extent of their involvement in

Eliminating compassion

Remains the current movement

Leaving no mutual agreement

In place for sympathy towards

The next fellow man or woman

Sociable acceptance

Remains remotely too hostile

For anyone who desires

A Loving Nest of Unconditional Acceptance

Reviews

[ms. barrie]

oops.. i skipped over the first version (big surprise!) --Bpoet: your immense talent for words is truly astonishing!

The imagery, flowing through this entire write is simply brilliant. An amazing portrayal of what our society has now sadly become, apathetic, narcissistic, "me, me ,me."

this write speaks volumes...a sad truth that should definitely be spoken about, thank you for sharing!

wonderfully penned! (favs.) - 100 to 100