The Hidden Key's Of Personal Truth Within Everyone (Pt.2)

Now reentering the corridor

Of locked doors

Seen as personal restrictions

Making everyone less than the whole person

They could truly become

Realities Lock # 2 is (Pride)

Confining anyone's yearning for their

Personal Key # 2 which is (Perseverance)

Unlocks Door # 2 to experience

The defeat of Realities Lock #2

By making your enemy

Become more humble

Beyond the scope of its lies

(Pride) loves to contend with

You needing to gain more mental strength

For overcoming the # of deceits written

Within (Pride's) itinerary book

Unlocking a personal truth called

(Personal Strength and Fortitude)

Anticipating for what's yet to come

In the next solemn search for all of the

Hidden Key's of Personal Truth Within Everyone (Pt.3)

Leaving no clue

To speculate when the next truths

Will be arriving on time within plain view

Of the viewer who needs to be renewed
By finding the lost etiquette treasure within himself

As well as me or you

Reviews

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

talking about keys and locks is a very interesting concept...though all clustered together like that is a bit...i dunno...muddled (but thats just me). I really like this poem though and I love the idea of unlocking all these aspects of yourself to become who you could be. lovely job, melon (elvish for friend) :D

[Rogue]

Alright.. Now you are complicatin' my philosophies. :P
Personal strength, as you point out is a needed thing. But, I will add.. So is pride. Without pride in yourself and your abilities, you would never seek to improve or excel at anything. You'd just be an underwear wearin' couch potato that badly needed to bathe. :P
The world has changed.. And a small amount of arrogance today is also needed. Know who you are. Both the good and bad, lay ownership to it. Never let another define you.

-grin-

I so enjoy these little chats over your pieces.
You know they ignite my interest and definitely set me to chattering away.

:)