Hidden Under The Light Of Day (Short Variance Version)

Hidden Under The Light Of Day

Is the willfulness

To display

What's within the foray

Of a definitive soul's

Daylight shadow to date

Illustrates a spectacle

Meant to demonstrate

Written art imitating life

In ways unimaginable towards dictating

The pace for what's culturally substantiated

As a variant social masquerade that's currently

Hidden Under The Light Of Day

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

I've always been fascinated by the "life imitating art" phenomenon so this piece resonated pretty well with me...fine work as always :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Wordplay at its finest. I love the way that this piece sounds. You have a gift when it comes to painting sounds with your wording and phrasing, which I much appreciate. Reading you is always an experience. I especially like the lines:

Daylight shadow to date
Illustrates a spectacle
Meant to demonstrate
Written art imitating life

So well done!

[Rogue]

-smile-

I love reading your poetry, B. my mind just does it's own thing and I muck up your careful written thoughts so badly. :D

Social conformity.. Depends on how much you care what others think. There are upsides and downsides to it. Doesn't hurt to be nice. It's a sign of respect and a spirit to want to do overall good. Nice does not equal trust. If you surround yourself with a few hearty souls who have withstood the test of time and your moods and tantrums.. They only want you to be yourself. You'll find you're much happier that way. :)

Write on! ;)