In a Daze

Was it yesterday

Or is it better

To be In a Daze today

Formidably

Spinning in a habitual circle

Of conducive reasoning

Back and forth

Forth and back

Out of the last hastening

Thought circle not being exact

On pace to extract personal morals

Now joining the wrong social pack

To promote a signified pact

Where I took a wrong turn

After the fact

Now wanting to go back

To the times of nostalgic vibrancy

Honestly speaking

Being In a Daze

Sounds unwittingly strange

Yet for most people

They wouldn't want to live life

Any other way

Reviews

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

nice message here...whenever we don't pay attention, we often miss things and end up in a daze. great job :D

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Interesting write, to be in a daze is something. Though sometimes we can miss things while in that daze. Nice one.

[Trigorin]

Not bad. I don't think you need to italicize 'in a daze' as that seems a little heavy-handed to me. You have a good concept and you express it well, but I think you could use a bit more heightened imagery here and there - without it this seems a bit too monologuey. Other than that, good work.

[kublakhan27]

Ignorance has never sounded so blissful...I definitely feel this one my friend.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Living in a daze...an interesting idea to explore. Sometimes i feel as though I'm walking through fog for days at a time; going through the motions, but longing for the past, when things seemed brighter and more vibrantly exciting. Still, there are days when I can go out into my own life and truly appreciate the beauty that it holds...those are the days that I live for. Nicely done, my friend.

[Holly Mason]

I am not one to live in a daze...I actually like reality no matter what is going on in my world or with those around me
you have expressed yourself wonderfully and I enjoyed your thought provoking thoughts
thank you for sharing

[Rogue]

Yes, well.. Living in a daze is all well and good as long as you realize eventually that rosy glow will wear off eventually and reality is going to kick back in. :)

Love the wording and structure of this one. I kept visualizing an endless spiral staircase and people climbing and descending..

Great work!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This to me has layers upon layers of what seems to be spinning on it's heel at this very moment... at what point does the spinning stop so you can get your equilibrium back and focus on what is important?... I wish I knew the answer to my own question... Intriguing, clever write Bpoet...Nicely done!

[Ees]

Truth.
Living in a daze does often feel right.
I enjoyed the bouncing and circular thoughts of this poem. You used the words appropriately to portray the concept, in effect giving it more credence. Nice work.