Admiring Her & Her Heart From A Far

I was in awe

Of her beautiful skin

As the beating of her heart

Radiated a sense of compassion

I pursued my treasured infatuation

Every time

I glanced at her

Breathtaking figure

Each second remained worthwhile

Forever in a moment seeing

The apple of my eye

For the time being

I became a heartfelt

Admirer From A Far

I only dreamt about

Her loving gestures of flirtation

Towards me

As I was inconspicuously noticing

Her making eye contact

With me gingerly as

I hoped to make

An initial first impression upon

My one and only

Adorned female work of living art

By capturing her golden heart

Of mesmerizing beauty

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Perfection!... A lovely piece of Romantic yearning, indeed!~xo~:)

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

what a wonderful job youve done here! Not only is the diction wonderful but the whole thing is just beautiful :D

[Holly Mason]

this is very well penned with emotion behind your words
leaves me with a sense of yearning -capture her golden heart
I have always enjoyed reading of someone's admiration it is lovely
nice lines throughout
thank you for sharing

[Rogue]

I think this is not only well written, but a beautiful expression of feelings. It feels very honest and heartfelt. :)