Befriending Thin Air

No connection

With anyone near

My radius

Navigating off the social radar

Conspicuous by far

An interesting experience

Remaining miniscule

In appearance

As one part of a whole

Outlined puzzle frame

I'm seen as a piece

To a formidable picture

Without a belonging force

Pulling me in

For social interaction

Yet only fresh thin air

Is my relevant companion

As I'm a traveler

Amongst lookers and bystanders

Who have no care

Of being concerned

With a premonition

Disguised in the flesh

As a friend of

The blowing thin air's

Contrary wind's

Of speculation and suspicion

Adorned by the chatter of doubters

Who don't even know that

The real me

Has already passed by them

While flowing within the breeze's of eternity

Reviews

[Rogue]

Just another face in the crowd..

Again, I think this is a really good piece of work.
The only thing I would do different is change one of the "thin air's" to something synonymous. Repetition without purpose (hook lines not included) is just one of my personal pet peeves.

[Scarlet Alice]

Still a fan of such kind of poem...

just not sure about the thin air... hmmmm i don't know... still its good.. :)

[gcp]

This is great

"But you see that line there moving through the station?
I told you, I told you, told you, I was one of those..."

Somehow holds that drifter feeling for a moment, before it slips out between the fingers.

:)

[Debbie_Philly]

Great Job Bpoet.... I liked it allot !!

[kublakhan27]

This one definitely spoke to me...loneliness was the first emotion that came to me, then I wondered if these were the words of a recluse...all in all, it's a pretty definitive statement of alienation...nicely done :)

[M]

Really good one! I feel really connected to this piece. Nice work. :)

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

i really really like this one! good job :D

[Holly Mason]

the real me has already passed by them....strong statement I like
chatter of doubters-like this as well
like the title it adds interest to your content
thank you for sharing