Ready For Change Until The Evadable Ending Gates Open (Revised)

Change

Is such

A great experience to inherit

What your not accustomed too

For the sake of your own good

Should take place

During the plot

Regarding

Each growing stage of life

Child, Adolescent, Adult

Then on to becoming a Respected Elder

Whether male or female

Why not

Embrace change

For the better

It's as timeless as

A daytime mirage

Taking shape

Demonstrating an overall

Point and purpose

Made into a feature presentation

Needed to be seen

Changing the perception

Of the viewer

Indeed relating to

The grand scheme

Favoring the complexity

For existing as a human being

Made up of flesh and spirit

Thus intellectually

Built to function as

A mortal male or female

Participating

In a distinguishable journey

Worth experiencing

Until the very end

Where the evadable gates

Will finally open

To extend our life span

As unforgetful spirits

Passing on into the eternal bliss

Of a heavenly afterlife

Reviews

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

once again, fantastic re-write here! I love this :D