Self Sacrificing (A Blessing or A Curse) - Revised

Is it a blessing

To be cursed

Or is being cursed

A blessing

In a sense

To where

Self Sacrificing

Is an edifice

For housing

Executives and delegates

Presently on the payroll

With their names on the doors

Of each and every office

Corresponding too

At least 50 floors

Remain existent to run

A compromising business

Gravitating the souls

Of all who've attained

A membership

For frequent toil

That benefits

The character manufacturing sector

Of the human race

As a whole

Being dynamically impaired

Yet desperately

Trying to find an antidote

Is a blessing to cure

The curse of the land

Even though

There's a epidemic at hand

To purify this indiscretion

Perfecting

The needed measures taken

Will be necessary

So Self Sacrificing

Now becomes

The solid graphite

Exposed as granite

Emerging as an immortalized

Humanitarian statue

For all eyes to see

Within a delegated executive's

Hall of fame's hallways

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(Blessed or Cursed) Self Sacrificing

Reviews

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

This is much much MUCH better! Fantastic job :D I really like the flow of the poem here...its just really great :D