Ocean Bliss

Along the shorelines

Of hopeful dreams

Beaches set the stage

For an Ocean Bliss

A infinite view

Of the tide coming in

Washes away the disappointments

Of well-wishers

And bad intentions

Of non-environmentalists

Along the shorelines

Of an ocean advocacy

Remaining as a shield for

Protecting wildlife

Along the world's sea shores

Becoming an ally for all sea turtles

Crawling to be swept up in an Ocean Bliss

They value the tides strength

For keeping it's species from becoming extinct

A rare gift indeed

Brought forth from the heavens

Represented as a harmonious

Ocean wildlife caretaker

Of all the sea world's inhabitants

Who are forever in search of an Ocean Bliss

Author's Note

Experimenting a little here. All reviews welcome. :)

Reviews

[Scarlet Alice]

Really I felt like looking at the ocean while reading it. :)

Great piece...

["writing by" KS]

Along the shorelines
Of hopeful dreams.
Yes indeed. Lovely work. Thank you :)

[Krista Weiss]

This is really great!! loved it! :)

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

i like this alot. well done :)

[Holly Mason]

miss my ocean....beautiful imagery protecting the sea and it's wildlife is a wonderful obligation
like the title much
thank you for sharing

[Wild Willow Blue]

A very peaceful poem. I was relaxed, looking at the ocean. You took me there. Well done.

[Androglossia]

I feel like I am on a marine trip and is having a conversation with a wise man who sees more than what meets the eye. There is so much truth in this poem. The ocean, no matter what lies beneath is a natural healer. It soothes the spirit and lightens the heart. It is an endless confessional. This is a great write and wise.

[Corset]

Ancient and majestic, the Sea Turtle, such a wonderful relaxing visual this poem lends, the the word bliss in itself is calming , because of you I am now envisioning perfect sandy beaches and little turtle families laying eggs out in the dunes , I see the little tracks the babies make to the water, wonderful work here B :)

[Victoria]

I really like this. The lines seem well thought out (: Good job!