Self Sacrificing (A Blessing Or A Curse)

Is it a blessing to be cursed

Or is being cursed a blessing

In a sense

To where

Self Sacrificing is an edifice

For housing executives and delegates

Presently on the payroll

With their names on the doors

Of each and every office

Corresponding too at least 50 floors

Remain existent

To run a compromising business

Gravitating the souls of all who've attained

A membership

For frequent toil that benefits

The character manufacturing sector

Of the human race as a whole

Being dynamically impaired

Yet desperately trying to find an antidote

Is a blessing to cure the curse of the land

Even though there's a epidemic at hand

To purify this indiscretion

Perfecting the needed measures taken

Will be necessary so Self Sacrificing

Now becomes the solid graphite

Exposed as granite

Emerging as an immortalized

Humanitarian statue for all eyes to see

Within a delegated executive's  

Hall of fame's hallways

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Reviews

[Joanna Johnson]

Good description, abstract, but leaves you thinking.

Have you thought of breaking up you stanza into two or three - you can make several stanza, separate the lines in certain areas where you want your poem most emphasized. It would give your poetry more empahsis and be easier on the reader to. Many blessings!

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

there is a bit of fragmenting at the beginning that I'm not a huge fan of, but the poem itself is really quite wonderful. great job!