Affected Lives Within Your Lifetime (Version 2)

How many lives can you affect

In your own lifetime

The reward remains defined

As a voluntary tread mill climb

To give back to humanity

For the sake of normality

Gaining formal relate-able subtlety

Within every community

Needs to be done

In a more timely fashion

Leveling out the social grid

Consciously

Are a group of an influential

Gearing minds of peer advocates

Pushing to create a symbolized

Compromising social banner

Where peace has been an uplifting

Experience for all

Who've been seeking it out

The preservation of self

Needs to be promoted

As this campaign slogan

Affect the lives of many

Strengthening their souls

So they can politically overthrow

Plus disembowel

The organized tyranny

Existing within every crooked visionary

That's currently in power as we speak

Reviews

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

great improvement, well done!

[Trigorin]

You've definitely expanded it, and I do like the new bits you've added, and I do feel as though you've fixed the ending in this version. Much improved, well done.