Dreams Unfulfilled

Dreams Unfulfilled

A Poem by B-poet

How would it really feel

To leave this life with our dreams unfulfilled

Did divine intervention

Take a back seat

From the feats of our decisions and conquests

That were incomplete in a restricted social atmosphere

Solidifying regrets

That set the stage for our lives

Within our lifetime

Or did living up to the hype

Of our deeds done in the dark as well as daylight

Find an inadvertent way

Into a realm named unfulfilled dreams

Denied from the start

In part

To a undeniable cause

Called existing within the corridors

Of a maze

With each and every door

Labeled innocence lost

Dare to enter and endure the cost

Of humanity's fall from grace

Since dreams are just a factious twist on our present reality's fate


© 2013 B-poet


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Again your extensive vocabulary pleases me---
the words you have at your fingertips are necessary
to bear the load of heavy thoughts.
Good job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


very deep..and nicely put.


Posted 11 Years Ago


A great read, B! We have free will - we have grace. How we choose to see within as well as what is around us... is free choice. Our choice to be happy, or not... even in difficult times our core feeling is our choice, not the outside influences around us. So many people live within the trials and failures of their past. We don't live there anymore! I really wish more people could move away from dwelling on their past and move forward without all that weight. It can drain the soul. Mistakes... leave them in the past. Hurt... let it go. Abuse... forgive and move on for yourself more than anything... whatever the case may be, people only rob themselves of a brighter future. God's grace is not meant to be difficult or a burden. :) Great write - had me thinking!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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