Socially Feasible

If you want to fit into the world’s social jigsaw puzzle

Just be yourself

Because you’re the main social puzzle piece

That needs to fit

While shaping the rarest form of self imagery

Posed as a picture

Of the perfected sin free

First version of yourself

Within the Garden of Eden as we speak

Of the past that could have been

For eternity

Yet temptation and bigotry

Was within the fruit that was bitten

Making it impossible to live within paradise

Now we’re smitten

With experiencing death and social depravity

While being human

Within the human race

Of nonconformity

That’s presently existing

Reviews

[ms. barrie]

This is an extremely profound, insightful poem 0you have here, great choice of words, very unique. wonderfully penned. thanks for sharing

[Emerald Seas]

Another interesting read, B. I'd like to see the message without the ambiguity - more straight forward. Then, I feel it would reach a wider audience.

[afra]

wow ...amazing write ...i love it

[Claire Twinn]

Seems like a jumble of ideas here, fitting in like a puzzle piece and not conforming. The whole idea of sin seems a bit weird to me, but its true we are both good and bad.

[cloud]

Although I feel you get deep in this poem, I feel it suffers from a combination of the mundane and the attempt to be complex at the same time. I would try to explain it within a more simpler context. Just my thoughts though, as I can see, others feel differently. Nice penning.

[Emberlorna]

Wow so deep and intriguing I really enjoyed :}

[Krista Weiss]

Wow!! really great job!!!

[David Scott]

At what point is being a nonconformist just anouther way to conform? I like the poem's idea. The read was rather bland.

[†Tracey†]

So true..x

[kublakhan27]

Words to live by for sure