When Will Time Ever Stand Still

When Will Time Ever Stand Still

The thrill

To achieve this

Would complete

The realization to never retreat

When opportunity presents itself

No one else

Has the power to halt the pendulum

Like a telekinetic medium

Feeling the rush

After making it real

By standing behind a podium

Addressing the public

Within a symposium

While their chosen spoken message

Is always

Subliminally illustrating a secret procedure

For finding the answer to why and

When Will Time Ever Stand Still

For only the positive benefit of freewill

And not evil

　

Reviews

[ms. barrie]

very thought-provoking poem,simplicity in it's structure yet, holds so many meanings. thanks for sharing!

[kublakhan27]

This is a bit of a stylistic departure for you...it's shorter and more direct, at least how I'm reading it lol Not that there's anything wrong with that...it's an intriguing concept, and the last three lines really sum it up nicely, and rhyme nicely as well^^