Cherished Breaths

I cherish each and every breath

I take

As I rise and rest

Everyday while

Making my way through the vagueness mist

Of false pretense

On all accounts

That I’ve experienced during

My quest

To maximize my substantiated graces

Seeing vast faces and places

After each and every moment

There’s never stillness

It’s hard to predict and witness

All of life’s forecasted projections

For what lies ahead of my path

My lungs expand and restrict

The airways

I need to take in a precious

Gas called air

To help me share

The gift of penmanship

With all well-wishers

That dwells from within

Getting you to see why

My words reflect

All the cherished breaths

I’ve been blessed to take in retrospect

Reviews

[Nina Burke]

Very inspirational! I can imagine reading this before I begin my day or silently reciting it as I'm doing morning yoga!

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Nice write, I like these parts:
"My lungs expand and restrict
The airways
I need to take in a precious
Gas called air"

"My words reflect
All the cherished breaths"

[P.S.Chance]

a good reminder that every day is a blessing and every experience a stroke on the painting of our life.

[Corset]

beautiful poetry here, each and every breath is someone we remember with love.

[Pax]

Cherished Breaths in poetic journey... Profound and Wonderful, Great Job!

[That1Nerd23]

Very beautifully written. I love how intense the message and emotion came across. Excellent piece! (:

[ms. barrie]

poignant, enlightening. very descriptive, written with eloquence. extremely well written, i very much enjoyed reading this! thanks for sharing!

[Faceless Poet]

a very wise man, indeed!

[Redrascalstrawberry]

Wise words. It's important to cherish each and every moment in your life. You have written it nicely and passed the message well.
Good!

[Deandra Dawn]

A very worthwhile journey.....nicely done.