A Philosophical Link To A Profound Messenger

There are thieves within the shadows

As nightly fog

Conceals their evasive

Actions to covet my morale mission’s message

My opposers need it to strengthen their hypocritical views

Over both my oppressed people and daunting socialites

While draining the value of my insights

Meant to foster their lost and unguided lives

Of our present time

They are yearning for redemption

As their mistakes have weighed heavy on

Their reputations

Inspiration from me has been their desired

Coveted prize

They’ve all had relational ties

With my gift called insight

To combat their political oppressor’s strife

After trying to begin a new and prosperous life for themselves

The aftermath of the oppression ceased

As they found a higher sense of subtlety with ease

Without any speculation

The end of this social disease

Became true indeed

Within the eyes of many redeemed

People that dwelled within

A savage community

Without immunity from a hierarchy promoting

An Ill-advised taxation mockery

Making the law makers wealthy

While weakening the working class majority

Of all the citizens involved

Was further outlawed by their protests

Exposing the flaws of their oppressors subliminal scheming

Finally linking the profound messengers message

With perfect timing

Within the sound spectrum of their deaf ears

Awakening their subconscious minds

While redeeming them from their evitable fall from grace

In the midst of their peers for the sake of their spiritual peace

As human beings

Reviews

[Krista Weiss]

Great job!!! :)

[afra]

very deep and beautiful ....wonderful write

[Bumble]

100/100 Wonderfully done!

[kublakhan27]

Wow this is quite the deep and potent social assessment...the style really puts me in mind of old T.S. Eliot...I love how the spirituality factor creeps in towards the end, almost like a warning to the soulless powers-that-be. Great work :)