Significant Conscious Wall Puzzle Pieces

Life, nature and misplaced spirituality

Relate to unplanned discrepancies

In the lives of many citizens

So I’m fitting my significant wall puzzle pieces

Together while creating a imagery

To combat these disappointments

Within my mental tapestry

Contrary to what I had in mind

The pieces used to dignify

What I’ve envisioned as a better society

Are clearly within 500 pieces

Of a well orchestrated portrait

Ready to be displayed

And critiqued by enthusiasts

Who know the signification

Of this proposed depicted image

In sync with all the fitted puzzle pieces

Used to uplift the confused and destitute

People who choose to rebuke against

What they've never experienced

As a significant breakthrough

On the road towards their true calling

Reviews

[Pax]

wow!

[Krista Weiss]

Wow! Really good!!

[kublakhan27]

Again, you've presented the plight of an artist with crystal clarity, to the point where I'm not even sure what else to say lol...100 :)

[Corset]

I can feel that you are trying to put something together here and I like the reference to under 500 pieces, being a pretty intricate puzzle, not as challenging as a 1000 piece, but I am always open to an uplift, I feel you are building up to a reveal of some sort of significant importance to yourself that you feel will be to us as a society as well. If you can help anyone along as to their true calling then I say all the power to you :) I'll stand by.

[Amelie]

This piece, which is seemingly a philosophical rebuttal to a society you pictured out less to be an ideal portrait has a wielding tenacity to it. I was mentally reading it and could have more impact and conviction if achieved through rhythm. I'd like to suggest split in stanzas. Nevertheless, great write.
A little trivia: this is my first review since I got back a while ago in the Cafe.