Finishing Who Was Me

Someone told me to finish somethings,

To get on with my life

Find myself, find my voice,

But I find that I am attached

To the other half that is me.

My heart is his, my mind with him

In desert places and high rocky faces

So when he comes home

To my arms and my body

I will finish what I have started

Live the life I meant on livin'.

Somethings are just more important

Than finishing the one who used to be 

I've replaced them with the love he gives to me.

Reviews

[Constance-Outspoken]

Love has this funny way of changing how we see the world, and when it's a real and true love, every word they say, everything they do affects every word we say, everything we do. Priorities and dreams and even talents and causes change with love, as it should be.
Wonderful sentiments with which I can wholly identify. Thank you very much for sharing this poem.

[Kelley]

I liked this a lot and you can tell you care a lot for this person.
Great write thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Poeticpiers]

part of the maturation process M lady comes to us all when we know who we are and what we want

[MissWordSmith]

this is nice...i don't agree with it with its your view and i get that. personally i think we have to find ourselves first...Good write though!