Phoenix

Derogatory remarks are all that leave your blackened lips,
Vindictive to the very core of your being.
I will not allow you to expurgate my words,
It will not eradicate the tempest of emotionsI have created.
Your scrupulousness is tied to the here and now
And cannot reach the edges of my imagination.
I wish not to cause revolutions,
But instead aspire to inspire those who once thought
Their thoughts and their words meant and mean nothing.
Words have been used for centuries to rise people from the ashes
And you will not stop prevent others from doing the same.

Reviews

[T. Everts]

"
It will not eradicate the tempest of emotionsI have created.
"
Put a space after emotions.

I really like the pheonix metaphor here, relating to the rebirth of inspiration.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

The take charge attitude here is of fiery emotion.
Your title and subject matter were truly fitting.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Dang such powerful words... rising up and showing to fear to one who bullies to gain power and confidence.
Love the boldness of this piece.

[DC Gentleman]

I hear that.. wonderful message..

Still you rise..

[R J Askew]

A great blast from a positive optimistic force against its opposite. The poem cld also be read like an internal debate between confidence and doubt. I esp like the last couple of lines. May the forces of optimism prevail!