Coward

Coward

A Poem by Azriel


Trapped under icy seas i am drowning
I am freezing In a world of lies. 
I see them walking on the surfac, 
Merry as can be, and loved by the radiance of the sun. 
But under this placid lake I am alone, 
How could they not see me, not hear my desperate calls? 

Time has had its way with me and I am frozen,

Apathetic to the searing burns of these dark desolate waters 
No one to hear my cries
On the surface, they all walk over my miserable deadly state.
But soon, I know the day shall come

When they will hear me and not just see my silhouette, 
When I will be lifted from these waters and restored.

But until then can you please unthaw my freezing soul? 

For I am too weak, too shallow to find my way out.

© 2013 Azriel


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Very detailed description of emptiness, still a ray of that someone will come to aid us.. What a nice poem! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


"No one to hear my cries
On the surface, they all walk over my miserable deadly state.
But soon, I know the day shall come

When they will hear me and not just see my silhouette, "
That is some good poetry...Pen on dear friend...:)



Posted 11 Years Ago


Azriel

11 Years Ago

thank you, sami glad you enjoyed this
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

I did... My pleasure...:)

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Added on May 17, 2013
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Tags: life, trapped, death, love, ice, coward, religion, poem, alone, love loss, poetry, god, relationship

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Azriel
Azriel

Port of Spain, Trinidad and Tobago



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