Haikus

Rays of light heat all,

Chirping birds and skies of blue,

Nakie trees.... no snow.

 

(condensed version)

Rays heat all,

Chirping skies of blue,

Nakie trees.... no snow.

 

Grass a golden tan,

Crying out with every step,

Frost bitten winter.

 

(condensed version)

Golden grass,

Shouting steps,

Frost bitten winter.

 

Smoke leaving the nose,

Pricks of cool air fill the lungs,

Human now dragon.

 

(condensed version)

Smoke leaves nose,

Cool air pricks the lungs,

Dragon man.

Reviews

[misscb]

Love the wording... Really great... Well done!!!

[Kara]

These are all great :) I love how you've written two versions of each.