The Wall

The Wall

A Poem by Kaelee Wyant

I build a wall

And then conceal

The things I think

The way I feel

 

The water’s building

Up behind

And if it breaks

Then you may find

 

It needs support

It’s not that strong

But I have known that

All along

 

But  you still see it

Proud and tall

And you will never

See it fall

© 2014 Kaelee Wyant


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Just a thought: saying "ways I feel" (instead of "way I feel) complements the plurality of "things" in the previous line.

Other than that: I have no words.....my voice is in my awe!! Absolutely fantastic!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Your mind plays well with your own deepen insights. Loved the analogies of your wordy-productions. So much you've portrayed 'pon hearts through the single beam of your poetry. Excellent. A very great message either you've sent to the rest of the words in guise of your poetry. Means, everyone needs some kinda support to stand with their POVs... so likelihood the wall, people should either stand on their visions with much belief's so that no other pal could take it away off you what's just yous: "The Visions". However, sometimes, the wall goes broken so do hearts... and blah.. blah.. blah. What a beautiful concept you've come up with. Short... simple but very effective for sure. I'd be looking forward to reading "you".

Posted 9 Years Ago


May your new year be filled with happiness and beautiful expressions of yourself through your poetry and music. I am so proud of you and love you always. Gammy



Posted 9 Years Ago


I found a Poem that you wrote as a child about a Christmas Tree, may I put it under your reviews?
Gammy

Posted 10 Years Ago


You are very talented and gifted, and I am so proud of you. Have a Merry Christmas Kaelee, and I love you. I would write you a poem to tell you how much, but can't write poetry like you. So all I can do is tell you from my heart.
Love always,
Gammy


Posted 10 Years Ago


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Gee
Like this,nice flow easy to read

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a relly good poem, I says that you have this wall and theres water on the side it's not that strong but it will never fall. A wonderful poem. Good work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kaelee Wyant

10 Years Ago

Thanks =) I only write when I'm upset and my poems always show what I'm feeling.
PrestonWL

9 Years Ago

Wow.... good job!!
xoxo

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Added on December 22, 2014
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Kaelee Wyant
Kaelee Wyant

Punxsutawney, PA



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I don't show myself to people. If you want to really know me read my poems/lyrics/whatever else I upload. If you look at my pictures the smiles fake but what else is new. I love poptarts and apple jui.. more..

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