Your mind plays well with your own deepen insights. Loved the analogies of your wordy-productions. So much you've portrayed 'pon hearts through the single beam of your poetry. Excellent. A very great message either you've sent to the rest of the words in guise of your poetry. Means, everyone needs some kinda support to stand with their POVs... so likelihood the wall, people should either stand on their visions with much belief's so that no other pal could take it away off you what's just yous: "The Visions". However, sometimes, the wall goes broken so do hearts... and blah.. blah.. blah. What a beautiful concept you've come up with. Short... simple but very effective for sure. I'd be looking forward to reading "you".
May your new year be filled with happiness and beautiful expressions of yourself through your poetry and music. I am so proud of you and love you always. Gammy
You are very talented and gifted, and I am so proud of you. Have a Merry Christmas Kaelee, and I love you. I would write you a poem to tell you how much, but can't write poetry like you. So all I can do is tell you from my heart.
Love always,
Gammy
This is a relly good poem, I says that you have this wall and theres water on the side it's not that strong but it will never fall. A wonderful poem. Good work!
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thanks =) I only write when I'm upset and my poems always show what I'm feeling.
9 Years Ago
Wow.... good job!!
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Yours Truly, and yours sin.. read moreWow.... good job!!
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I don't show myself to people. If you want to really know me read my poems/lyrics/whatever else I upload. If you look at my pictures the smiles fake but what else is new. I love poptarts and apple jui.. more..