Shooting Sins

Sometimes punishments can be overlooked if you try hard enough.

I wonder what to wish

When I see a star

Cause all I ever really want

Is to be where you are

 

I remember last night

It begins to rain

And mask starts to form

To hide all the pain

 

Hope is almost gone

The star is falling fast

Not really proud of things I did

Looking at my past

 

Punishment is dawning

And I can now see why

But I pay for every sin

Every time I cry

Author's Note

I feel like this

Reviews

[Neon]

Sometimes tears help us to get some relief from our pain ... form our memories. Happiness and sadness both're realistic in life and without both life can't be balance .. to balance the life ... tears and smile both're necessary as shelter's necessary for us .. because it's already present in nature. I liked the theme. Your stuffs're really very painful and filled with sorrow from where a reader can find depth of your crying heart. Hope everything's cool down in your life. Be smile and happy dear. We don't know and even can't predict what a new day can bring something special for us.

[The Nude Writer]

Lovely poem, so much raw emotion you put into this. Classic

[Kaelee Wyant]

Thank You =)