An Almost Ending

A man kills himself. Soon he is found and those who find him might find the same fate also.

The bullets to their head

With their stories left untold

Shaking hands of terror

For the note they will unfold

The waters running thicker

The day is almost done

They cant help but thinking

That the demons here had won

 

Try to run for cover

But they know hide and seek

It’s eating at you every day

Week after week

You try your best to stop it

But you always lose

And just like those before you

It’s a fate you’re gonna choose          

 

Now you know the story

And soon your heart will speed

After knowing of this death

It’s one that you will need

It’s slowly growing bigger

Ideas in your head

You slowly pull the trigger

And soon you are dead

Author's Note

Please leave thoughts of what you thought. I am nothing like what I write although this idea came from my friend Parker who killed himself. I thought I wouldn't get through it and I wanted to die. But, instead of killing myself, I wrote this poem.

Reviews

[DrD]

Kaelee, it's fine to write from your feelings and to use writing as your therapy and release. I admire that far more than being a commercial hack like me. Living through tragedy is tough but later it becomes part of the drama of life and it helps make you who you become. I admie this work and the young lady who did it.

[Bat-Becca]

I absolutely love that you can rhyme and make it sound good. The word choice--superb. The message behind this is inspiring and your strength to get through your friend's death even more so.
Although, I believe the the last line of the second stanza, you meant "chose" not "choice."
Regardless, I absolutely love this. Keep it up and stay strong.

[Kaelee Wyant]

Thank you =) I changed the word too