What have I become? (part II)

when I wrote what have I become, I started writing this piece too its just a part 2. from the limited feedback ive gotten, it helps the original. they will be posted together as a set as well

He drops the gun,
over the ledge it falls
it tumbles and twists, untill finally it hits,
it goes off,
another explosion.
a flash
more screams

he stands in shock,
what have I done?
what have I become?
he cannot move
he cant comprehend
his last connection to this world
found and a second later lost.
now,
truly alone,
he screams into the night.
in the back of his head, he knows he doesnt have much time
they will be here for him soon.
but does he care?
does it even matter?
no.
he has nothing left.

the door splinters, he has waited too long,
a glance to the left, a glance to the right, theres five of them, two armed
He prepares to dispatch them, but no.
no more killing, no more death
just one last hit, on a man more than deserving,
he runs, feeling the searing pain of a bullet in his leg, in his arm, in his chest,
but finally he leaps, over the ledge,
his fate now sealed, he lets out a sigh of relief, his last breath,
his mind calm,
he prepares for the end
he sees her face smiling, beckoning for him to come.
and then,
Nothing

Author's Note

the biggest thing I want to know is if this helps or hurts the original piece?