Love turned to Hate

not much to say. I loved her. she killed my heart. I want her dead but I know id regret it

Love turned to hate is a dangerous thing
Happiness turned into loathing and pain
Seeking your vengeance you banish the light
Your heart overflowing and blackened with spite

Now in your anger you see through her lies
The woman you loved you now wholly despise
Your world has turned itself upside down
And now you cry out afraid you might drown
Lost and forsaken you see in her eyes
She never loved you it was all a disguise

Why did she do it? to ruin my life?
That little b***h! you cradle the knife
Slipping through shadows and seething with ire
Her death in your mind is your only desire.

Now as you look with what once was compassion
You cry out and slash in a violent passion
Blood on the ceiling and blood on the floor
Blood on the walls and blood on the door
Smile! You've done it you're done with your deed
Now lie back and sigh as you watch her still bleed

Then all of a sudden the pain it returns
You try not to cry but the memories burn
You relive her screams and relive her cries
No one deserved this no matter the lies
Now as you slash at your arms and tear at your veins
You see love turned to hate is a dangerous thing

Reviews

[MandarinOranges]

"Wow"- seems to be the going word surrounding this poem, and I have to agree...WOW!

There are a few errors, but nothing big.

"Now as you look with with what once was compassion"
Now as you look with what once was compassion

Also, you should use puntuaction throughout or not at all.

Aside from that, I loved it. That there, is a very dark moment!

[.:Naiira Harlow:.]

What a beautiful poem! Emotion is practically seeping through this poem! I love how deliciously dark this poem seems to be. A few small errors, but the theme overpowers those anyway.

[I love you; just not to..]

wow. Reading that felt as if I was there. You created a story within the poem, that was great! I repeat again " wow "

[Promiss]

wow what an emotional poem. The pain of betrayed love was so vivid and real. Thank you for sharing!