Feeling

Feeling

A Poem by Azif

             await a moment
It's rising; breathless I finally understand
I was blank but I'm filled with colours
                white and green
I feel fulfilled; united; alive
but its still there
That feeling surrounding me

I feel my eyes watering, and I can sense it
belief and honesty
sorrow and guilt

--is it too late to forgive.

© 2017 Azif


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You have really expressed your feelings very well...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Azif

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the feedback, Najam :)
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

You're welcome... :)

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Azif
Azif

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