directions

I'm breathing without a rhythm

I need a pattern or some type of sequence

a type of beat

or flow

some guidance or love

to mend my ways

am I not crying loud enough for you?

Reviews

[Papaya]

azif, well written poem. some very strong feeling conveyed.

[Azif]

Thanks for the feedback :)

[J. David]

I'm breathing without a rhythm, such a strong start to such a deep poem. thank you for sharing

[Azif]

Thank you for taking the time to read my work. :)

[Shannon]

When metaphor and reality meet and both make equal sense, it. Speaks to me. As does originality.

[Azif]

Thank you!