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A Poem by Azif

straight road ahead

swerve

death


--there was a blockage

I didn't see it, I promise


smiled

you forgave me


done it again

unintentionally, I promise


do you secretly hate me?

I do.


admit

don't lie

I hate you

stop

get away


swerve.death. 

© 2017 Azif


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Seems like you are in routine of destruction. The well worn path is hard to leave sometimes. Good poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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the structure is an interesting one, the circular structure appears to show the destructive cycle the narrator is in within a relationship with a friend or lover, it will be interesting to see other interpretations of this

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Azif
Azif

Birmingham , United Kingdom



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