Chloroform

Brief and emotional poem about the horror of being assaulted and kidnapped.

I don’t think we’ve really met before;

Tell me, does this rag smell like chloroform?

Reviews

[Listmaker]

On second thought, I think this poem is perfect. I get it. The shock value worked for me. Good job.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is short and scary. I told my daughters. Don't truth no-one. In a few words you said enough. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Listmaker]

Ditto review from Max. I want more.

[Shaquana Adams]

This seems incomplete. From the description, it makes me think I'd read more of the actual kidnap ans assault

[max_vonnegut]

If this had been a bit longer i'm sure it would've been a trillion times more beautiful. Although there are only two lines , they are a really good and melancholic two lines!

[Azalea Belle]

Thanks! I'll probably add more to it later.

[max_vonnegut]

Welcome! I'll make sure to read it again when you do :)