i remember

a small portion of what my life was

i remember those days

where i hid under my bed

so your friends couldn't find me

i felt like i was dead

your eyes were dark

your voice made me cringe

i always hated you

on a drug using binge

i remember those nights

where your locked me out of my home

i was only a little kid

in the night city alone

i remember crying

begging you to stop

i love you so much mommy

im going to pop

this is your last chance

to make things right

so far so good

in you denying evil fight

Author's Note

my mom and i use to have troubles. she was into bad things.
remember that this is what she use to be like, she is currently in a rehab and is doing fabulous. :)
I love you momma bear, unconditionally

Reviews

[NewYorkNights]

There are no words.
All of the awards.
All of them.

[CourtneyMonroe]

That made me tear up! I never knew that!!!

[Ace D Portgas]

Geez this is deep! It's also very sad! I've had friends that didn't have bonds with there parents and heard about stuff similar to this...Rhyming scheme was excellent and even though it was an emotional poem the "I'm going to pop" part made me lol

But wonderful poem

[alexlessah]

Awww, well that is great your mom doing better now, very nice poem!

[Emunah June.]

It's such a sad thing when a child has a broken bond with a parent. Im so glad to know your mom is on her road to recovery. =)

[FemmeSpookyCorpse]

This was amazing, vivid, and raw. Certain phrases stung my heart as I read this, but it was beautiful = ]

[Dahlia Phoenix]

The way you used the iambic pentameter in order to make the end of each line rhyme was wonderful. I also like how simple you make it look as the conflict is arising with each experience that's being endured. Good job!