What He Sees

What He Sees

A Poem by MadeCheaply

look around little boy, what do you see?
that we're all okay, we're doing fine
when we're both fighting just to stay alive
ears are burning
eyes are crying
little boy i am sorry 
i am your guardian angel
and i know i have been doing wrong

don't let the anger consume you
chew you up and spit you out
don't let them destroy you
tarnish what good left in you
i know what you are all about

use the hurt and pain as stepping stones
let your lungs open up and take your place inside this world 
as the child who survived the fire
the abuse
the pain and sadness

you are always my hero
little boy

© 2012 MadeCheaply


Author's Note

MadeCheaply
I don't capitalize when I write poetry.
Anyway I was mainly wanting to get this off my chest.

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I have a feeling this is based around someone in your house? Someone tha lives with you yes?

Anyway, I really liked the whole idea you have woven into the poem. Nothing this emotional and full of hurt can be written without firsthand experience. A truly raw piece that brings out a sense of pain and lonlieness into the reader. Excellent work.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on December 9, 2012
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MadeCheaply
MadeCheaply

Silent Hill, MO



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Hey there, my designer name is Made but most call me Ayumi or Ozzy. I do what I want as long as someone somewhere sees it than it doesn't matter. My Youtube: http://www.youtube.com/user/ShukketsuS.. more..

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