Awaiting day

Yea!

The awaiting day
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Alas! For a day will come,
Of heavy rain and storm,
When dry bones will arise,
And roting flesh reform,
To the sound of crying bells,

I and you will be there,
To face the fate we've rear,
The good the bad and worst,
And everyone in mire,
Each! Awaiting for their fate,

The wicked act you've let,
The holy laws you've waste,
And the shadow standing by you,
Will be your judge at last,
To tell if you've lived in true,

Let us walk upright.
For hell is not a place,
For the kind of us to rest,
But paradise is the place
And we will be there if only we want.

Author's Note

Really awaiting

Reviews

[Great Aunt Astri]

Well done for writing this poem, we all wonder about the 'waiting day' let's hope for good fortune.

[Sami Khalil]

"The wicked act you've let,
The holy laws you've waste,
And the shadow standing by you,
Will be your judge at last,
To tell if you've lived in true,

Let us walk upright."

[Dhaye]

Nice words to ponder. We will reap what we sow.

[ayosonolowo]

Yea, thak you

[Blue]

"Let us walk upright.
For hell is not a place,
For the kind of us to rest,
But paradise is the place
And we will be there if only we want."

Wise words. I consider myself informed. I just found your name is David. :) There are a lot of Davids here.

[ayosonolowo]

Yea, thats my name, i appreciate your view

[Sami Khalil]

Words of wisdom and encouragement. We have to chose the paths in life and every one has consequences. A good message...Bravo.............

[ayosonolowo]

Than you very much, i appreciate

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).................